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just a repeated part that could be a song with some more parts

Recordings

  1. second half of song idea

    uploaded by Bruce on 6/25/2009

  2. just me repeating the main part

    uploaded by Bruce on 6/22/2009

Comments

  1. i fully realize these two parts have very different feels, but its the same chord shapes and im open to changing things

    by Bruce on 6/25/2009

  2. yeah, im trying to figure out how to fix that. any time i write a good song that i can sing over it has that same strumming pattern...

    by Bruce on 6/24/2009

  3. I really like it, this will be easy to make into another song.

    But we should work on the rhythm...it sounds a lot like Annie Oakley and Sweat&Snow.

    by Peter on 6/23/2009

  4. i think there can be a lot of instrumentation to bridge the two verses and then a great breakdown after the end of what i recorded with horns or keys

    by Bruce on 6/22/2009